1. You want some feedback? Ok, how's this. When I finally figured out how to get your metafeed sent automatically to my Zune library, I was displeased with the way the title kept changing. First it was Time Out! Episode 1, then Episode 2 – NaNoWriMo Week 1 Update. That format lasted for exactly two episodes, then the last one is Episode 4 – NaNoWriMo Update Week 3. Now they don't line up neatly in the queue.

    Consistency, please!!

  2. Ok, here's a real comment about the Time Out podcast. I like the excerpts you have given us from Stolen Time. It seems that the pace of the story is a little slower, which gives you time to paint a more vivid picture for each scene.

    In response to one of your questions, I do like the non-character-voice delivery better, mostly because in Borrowed Time I couldn't keep a straight face when you were doing the voice of the female deputy sheriff. Maybe it is because I know you too well and that gave me a mental image nobody should have to see.

    Keep on writing, and I will keep on listening.

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