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  1. A nice introduction to your new world and those characters. The way you describe them, and the way they spoke showed a clear distinction between their personalities and gave me clear vision of how I see them.

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      Thanks so much for your comment! It’s nice to hear that I’m managing to make the characters distinct, even in this rough first draft.

      K

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